A young screenwriter

Bursts of unfounded philosophy about Cinema from someone who watches a lot of movies and is writing two feature scripts-LOVE TEETH & D.A.R.S.

Nov 23

First Draft

I finished my first draft of “Love Teeth.”

It’s only 100 pages long. I feel like I could go another 20 or so.

Still thinking about changing the title…”Chaos, Love, and Teeth”…”Wisdom Teeth”…Bottom of the Bag…”Love, Chaos, and Teeth”….I don’t know.

I’m ready to start re-writing. First change would be opening scene that will happen with the three friends sitting in a cave so we can get to know them.

We’ll see what my readers have to say.